Wednesday, June 17, 2015

I'Ll Wait Comments

Rating: 4.5

Sad day moves to a sad night like the painful crawl of a wounded animal.

Memories of your smile is a bright light keep me alive like a beacon
of a light house guiding a lonely ship which lost its way in a storm in a night.
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tharindra galahena
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Chinedu Dike 17 June 2015

A well articulated love poem nicely penned with conviction. Comparing your hope and faith in waiting for your love with Prometheus unflinching hope and faith during his ordeal, to drive home your point is both appropriate and poetically remarkable. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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