I Love You Poem by Ashley Jensen

I Love You



I know I have heart
I know how much you love me
You say you'll never leave me
But i fear that you might
I know I worry
But i care so much
To know if I lost you my life would end
You could say I'm jealous
Which is true
But no matter what jealousy is a part of life and it is because
I love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aira Olayvar 24 January 2010

The poem expressed your true feelings for your love, though it needs a bit of comprehensiveness, the rhythm is already there, but I felt there’s something missing, I have the feeling like I am hanging on the air. Anyways, yes, when we are in-love, we could not eliminate jealousy… that’s part of it because we care… but the good thing is that you must learn to control it. Do not put your head on your fear of losing the one you love, if you don’t really want to lose him… it is the only main advise I want to give you. “Fearing and worrying is praying for something you do not ike”. Ok? Keep smiling and keep on writing! :)

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