I'm Alive Poem by Jeffrey Adegor

I'm Alive

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It's like an itch in your skin
One you don't know where to scratch
It's like the cold internally
And there is no blanket to prevent the catch
It comes suddenly
Like the break of a dam
Water flows ceaselessly
The beginning of a new dawn
It's like submerging in water
Surely you'll drown
Having a lover and crushing in another
Every day, your feelings go up and down
It's like writing a short story
With the size of an encyclopaedia
You can never really explain
But can only hope they understand
Without it, you can't breathe
It breaks down your defensive wall
Remember the talentless boy… breathe
He's got a talent after all

Thursday, May 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: inspiration
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
DR. Antony Theodore 18 May 2018

It comes suddenly Like the break of a dam Water flows ceaselessly.....It breaks down your defensive wall..giving went to all the inspirations in your heart. expressive of the wounds, inner wounds........ thank u for all the images here in this poem. love your poem.. tony

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Jeffrey Adegor 18 May 2018

I'm glad you do

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Bharati Nayak 17 May 2018

It comes suddenly Like the break of a dam Water flows ceaselessly The beginning of a new dawn It's like submerging in water- - - The emotions that rise inside are so strong, it can not be held back.One day it come forth like water breaking the dam.It is the beginning of a new dawn- - -A story of a river flowing. A beautiful write, thanks for sharing.

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Jeffrey Adegor 18 May 2018

Thank you so much

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