Wednesday, November 9, 2011

I'M Broken Comments

Rating: 5.0

No love to comfort
No heart to care
I'm broken beyond repair
No joy no sorrow
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Mackenzie Gray
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Romeo Della Valle 09 November 2011

Outburst of a broken heart that can not be repaired! Hard to believe unless you give up at such a young age! Oh Dear! I have survived to many broken hearts in my life that I can merely remember! Like I said in my poem' In Pursuit of Happiness' What I thought it was a great loss, it turned out to be a blessing from the sky' You too, will survive! A well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more such heart touching writes! God Bless You for always! Romeo from New York City...

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