I'M Done Poem by 7Shadows Teed

I'M Done

Rating: 5.0


Every scare,
Every pain,
Is written in blood.

You made my heart bleed,
Made me shed tears.
Now I’m done with you.

I'm done messing with you people,
With this world of yours.
I'm not messing around anymore...
Cause every pain you have done to me is written on blood now.
No sorry,
No kissing up,
No mistake,
Can't fix what you did to me.
Nothing can heal the pain you put me though.

I gave you all warnings yet you gave me none.
You tore my heart apart,
You made it bleed.
So I'm done with your games.
I'm done wasting my time on you all.
You tore my heart apart,
Now I will let you fall,
I will let you bleed and suffer on your own now.

There’s nothing that can change what you did.
There’s nothing that will take the pain away.
The one thing that can do all that,
I do not have anymore...
When I need it the most.
So I’ll stand on my own,
Without you.
I remember now why I shut out the world.
Why I didn't give a damn about it.
Now it's your turn to suffer,
Only I won't be there to help you this time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tinsley Starr 24 April 2007

Thats was really beautiful. The poem itself was perfect. Wow, I dont really know what to say. You know, I feel like that alot of the time, just because I guess. I mean I'm sure you have a good reason to feel that way, though.... or maybe not.... I dont really know. Anyway. Regardless, excellent job, beautifully done.... I really like alot of the lines you put in. It has meaning and its real unlike alot of poems. Keep on. ~ Anias

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