Bridget Gabrielle


I'M Listening - Poem by Bridget Gabrielle

Keeping to myself, I look up, and I know exactly where you are
I don't have to look for you
I can close my eyes, and I automatically see you
You're not hard to find. Everyone knows who you are

I know what you wear, how you walk, smell, and even your awkward laugh
I know you better than you think
However, there's something about you I don't know
I'm eager to know your past

What happened?
Will I ever be the lucky one to hear?
You can trust me
You're the puzzle, and I just want to find that one missing piece to you.


Comments about I'M Listening by Bridget Gabrielle

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/15/2017 3:12:00 PM)


    Will I ever be the lucky one to hear?
    You can trust me
    You're the puzzle, and I just want to find that one missing piece to you.

    i m hearing you. i am listening to yo.. where ar you. trust me....... i want to find you.. very nice poem written in a very original way.. thank you. tony
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  • Seamus O' Brian (4/25/2017 2:37:00 PM)


    This unfolds with a natural narrative ease, drawing the reader in, then trading mild suspense for a satisfying answer, yet leaving the story not fully told. Delightfully written, good poet.
    :)
    S
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  • (5/6/2011 1:53:00 AM)


    Wonderfully penned, and a thoroughly involving read. Quite a thoughtful piece. Much enjoyed. tfs (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, May 6, 2011


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