Friday, March 14, 2008

I'M Tired Comments

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I'm Tired
From time to time I caught that look in your eyes that said I'm tired

you’ve done what you can and been there for me when I needed you but....
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Karen Brogden
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Adrian Wait 01 April 2008

This is an excellent poem, keep writing, and thanks for your work.

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Philip Housiaux 14 March 2008

Very much a private poem with repetitive structure metaphor for strength of need. well done

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