I Miss You Poem by Ntshima Ramokone

I Miss You

Rating: 4.8


I wake up during the middle of the night
Having no Sleep appetite
Without happiness
Longing for you during day and night
I can’t breathe without you,
I try to control myself
But my heart just let it go,
I feel like dying with the pain
I can’t even help myself
But you are the only one who could be my Spiderwoman
To rescue me with your webs

I know we all concerned about the future
But better future couldn’t create itself
Both our hearts are crying like babies
Who miss their mother’s touches
You create more thirst of love in my heart
When I hear your voice
During your special answering session in the class
Each and every mini second
I got half crazy as we are friends
I thought that I will not feel more than friendship
But my heart proved me wrong
This is above the optimum

I try to eat with my entire mind
But it seems as if I’m increasing dualism
As my heart is increasing in starvation
Which could be healed by your soul food
As you are the best chef in my kitchen
To cook a perfect fried chicken
For me

Hope, I do really miss you
I don’t know which recipe you use
As it is not even written in the international recipes I do got
That’s totally different
I can’t even write effectively for now
Because of your best fried chicken
Like I used to be, I can’t be creative like I used to be
As you had burned my heart with your healing hot fire
It had stopped everything without you,
I didn’t even have a chance to speak with you
As I had a wake up call during res class
I knew you were amazed
And but I had no option,
I don’t even know how I’m I
Going to survive….please tell me
Give some advice

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmad Arli Hikmawan 25 August 2009

I guess you have joined the legion of fool in love... Welcome, my friend... At least until we all realize that it all just an illusion created by our mind. To make us think that we cannot be happy without it filling every chamber of our heart. Well done. Pardon my straight and shallow opinion.

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wake up during the middle of the night Having no Sleep appetite Without happiness Longing for you during day and night... u spend sleepless nights for her... it's stage so worrying and anxitey for us....lovely...10 read mine miss i miss u...mary to marry... how r u? ... anywhere and butterflies around

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Ntshima Ramokone

Ntshima Ramokone

South Africa: Limpopo Province, Tjatjaneng
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