Raul Luna

Rookie (7/28/91 / California)

I Miss You Caroline - Poem by Raul Luna

I miss you more than ever and I don’t know what to do
I wake up and remember you
Another day living without you awaits me
The mirror doesn’t lie, I look so different
I miss you

People are always the same
The rhythm of life seems so different
It was so much different when you were here
It was really different when you were here

There’s nothing more difficult than living without you
Suffering by waiting to see you come back
My cold body asks where you’ve gone
And I don’t know where you are
If you hadn’t left me I would be so happy


Comments about I Miss You Caroline by Raul Luna

  • (9/6/2008 7:42:00 PM)


    Oh...you have captured beauty tinged with sorrow and longing in a few short stanzas, and you have conveyed your emotion so well that I feel it in my heart as well. Very beautiful. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
Read all 1 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 10, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, June 13, 2008


[Report Error]