Saturday, July 25, 2015

I Miss You Mom! Comments

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l asked you not to leave me, I never thought you would
God took your life one night, and no one understood
I know he had his reasons, but I'll always wonder why
parts of us went with you, as you flew up to the sky.
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Dawn Rhoades
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Chinedu Dike 02 August 2015

A lovely memorial for a wonderful mum, well articulated and subtly penned from inner recesses of the heart. A lovely poem with beautiful rhyme scheme. I felt the powerful emotion of love deeply in my heart. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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