Lazarus Knix

Rookie (New Jersey)

I Move Through Your Eyes - Poem by Lazarus Knix

I move through your eyes

Like existence to the future

Ever constant tide,

Savage persistence

I move through your eyes

Unknowing and knowingly,

Every object is an emerald gaze,

A judgment, a gauge.

I move through your eyes

Everywhere I am I place you

Your presence accumulates

Like clustered snowflakes

I move through your eyes

Yet you are always still

In mine.

Comments about I Move Through Your Eyes by Lazarus Knix

  • (12/7/2009 5:55:00 AM)

    There is not much more I can add to Patricia's assessment of this, most beautifully conceived piece of romantic muse...the repeating first line, is simply mesmerising, fine title too, it captures from the reader, the poem, leaves us in awe.

    Well! only 18. Keep it up Lazarus Knix, you will go far.

    Smiling at you

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  • (12/6/2009 11:48:00 PM)

    Oh my; I said I was going to bed, but then this got me so excited. Just by the title, I could tell it was fabulous and immaculate! Which it is..that title is like a spark of brilliance landing on the mind. (smile) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 6, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 6, 2009

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