Sandra Dodd

Rookie (April 17,1967 / Los Angeles, CA)

I Plea Bottle Brunette! In The Comments Give Me Hell - Poem by Sandra Dodd

A sweet one messaged me,
can you read my poems?
I admire your honesty,
of you would like opinions!
AND if you might suggest
of yours the ones to read
I will do so diligently do so
like a student of your words

Busy I complied but only
in reverse order
as my usual reading time
I was planning on occupying
with doctors orders
'Sleep' he said 'Ms Dodd
you need it so very sorely! '

So I told the flattering lady
that for my best I thought
this one and that
for the funny or absurd
there were a few I had heard
tickled the funny bone
with my printed word
for the sexy I thought
Artist and Vacany,
Confession and
Not Business As Usual
also my favorite
Our Big Lovely Bed
with that message sent I went
to that bed I went
for a long lovely sleep

Arising this AM
I ran like always to my pen
wrote and then to read
the works of others
for this I need to be a writer
and a poet friend

AGH! UGH Shit!
What have I done?
For I recommended to a girl
the works that may make
her toes curl
for in her peoms
I discoverd
the story of
her birthday party
recently turning 14
but sweet like 12!
Oh my gads I think
I need a vicker,
possibly an attorney,
for sure a brain inventory
for they border
on soft porn.
I should be scorn
I have recommended
to a little sweet girl
some things more
than slightly dirty
designed to make
the reader sweat
and ya know slightly wet

I am waiting
for the mother
even possibly
the father
a dirty letter
of another kind
for smutting up
their daughters mind

Now I learned
to read the bio
a poem before
recommending
a look at my mind
so old and vile
Because a message
you cant put back
nor can you the white
vail off a virgin mind

Now I must go convert
because I am protestant
but feeling most overtly
the need to recite Hail Marys
and some Our Fathers
Possibly some money
to a house that reforms
little girls who years ago
listened to the wrong lady
read some hot poetry
and had a baby!


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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 9, 2010



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