I Remember Poem by chantelle ribeiro

I Remember

Rating: 5.0


She looks for you
in every face
She hears your footsteps
Echoes of yesterday
Her heart crumbles
when she shuts her eyes
Your face a blur
It still hurts
A million miles
Could never take
The love etched
inside of her
You broke her heart
Because of you
She fell apart
Tell me
Do you think of her?
On cold lonely nights
When the touch of Winter
comes to play?
Do you miss her?
With the hundredth tear you wipe away?
I remember that day
I watched as she walked away
A witness of your betrayal
You stood there speechless in the rain
Wrapped in misery and pain.
And all I could feel
Just not comprehend
Is why great love stories have to end?

Sunday, June 26, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Great poem. I was impressed. It was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Best regards Akmal

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chantelle ribeiro

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South Africa - Johannesburg
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