I Remember Poem by Drew Engman

I Remember



Every shout out to the future
Always ends up in the past
Dead and dying in the embers
Of a fate that didn't last

Every hope life let us keep
Kept us going through the rough
When times got bad, we both got tough,
But I remember, and I weep.

Wednesday, October 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deluke Muwanigwa 22 October 2020

Nice poem. I reckon you can achieve more symmetry if you rearrande 2nd phase rhyming scheme so it matches first. Just a thot

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Drew Engman

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Burbank CA 91505
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