I Remember T.M.S Poem by Sylvia Carter

I Remember T.M.S

Rating: 5.0


I remember you holding me
kissing me
I remember our scent together
how I enjoyed believing it was just you and I
my theory was I had the ability to satisfy you
I mean something I could succeed at.......

Until you brought another scent home to me, and still claim to LOVE me,
I'm not understanding, and I know it should not have been My fault
it hurt deeply because you did it over, and over, and over again

I got tired, lonely, frustrated, angry
I had to let you go in order for me to survive
I remember you holding me kissing me, before it all went wrong
I remember.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 May 2011

Great poem. Remarkable imagery with plenty of wisdom. Wonderfully written. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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