I Saw You Gift Poem by ONGODIA JAMES PETER

I Saw You Gift

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I saw you seated by the flame.
You outshone in frame and name.
This hand for faint a line I blame,
That has not painted you too well.

I searched you in the jostling crowd,
Your being when I saw set my core aloud.
Such face as yours is not behind the Cloud
As Nature still has painted you too well.

Lest I give you o'erwhelming Praise,
The doubting Thomas would think me crazed.
They would not credit what my poor Tongue says,
Yet well they know my Tongue is not a useless Swell.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rhys north 13 September 2026

it's beautiful, the energy put into this work is worth it

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ONGODIA JAMES PETER 16 September 2026

Thank you for your sincere comment. This gives me more courage to create more poems about real life situations. And they have always come to be my favorite as a writer

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