Monday, July 28, 2008
I Still Do Comments
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Hey you the beautiful girl in my dreams, she can put you knees, with her smile it seems, she makes you think that your floating, but you’re farther down, then the ground.
But I still do, I swear I still do, I think about you, I dream about you, every night, and every day.
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3/15/2026 8:15:00 AM # 1.0.0
I like this, a lot but...... I would structure it somewhat differently: Hey you the beautiful girl in my dreams, she can put me on my knees, with her smile it seems, she makes you think that your floating, but you’re farther down, then the ground. But its your poem........ just a thought. Roger.