Sunday, May 6, 2007

I Try To Talk To You, You Turn Away Comments

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I try to talk to you, you turn away.
I try to comfort you, you cry all day.
It's been days since we talked, you won't look at me!
I scream and throw books, but it's like you can't see.
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Amanda Baines
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Dee Daffodil 07 May 2007

Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! Totally aesome poem...this one sends chills up my spine. Imagine! ! The poor thing doesn't even know that she's passed on...it all makes sense, no wonder he won't talk to her...no wonder he's crying all day! ! ! ! Excellent Mandy! ! Hugs, Dee

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