I'Ve... Poem by Brittney Karasek

I'Ve...



I've lost my way.
There's nothing left of me.
I'm dependent.
I'm defending.
I'm abusing.
and...
I'm losing...


you've got so far to go...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Terry 20 December 2008

You know that that is a very good question Brittney. I am everything you said here except abusing. I guess for those of us that have these thoughts, we will never know the answer as to why. But we know that others try to force us to live their lives no matter what we want, need, or have to do to be happy. There is so much emotion in these lines. Even though the words are few, this says mountains of wisdom, and has a very clear message og angst deep in the soul. Thank you for sharing, and you get a 10+ from me. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Brittney Karasek

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Oklahoma, United States.
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