hannah hatfield


I Wait - Poem by hannah hatfield

I wait, the cold air being hit by smoke
you lie there effortlessly, you wait too
wait to be forgotten like the other ghosts I knew
unwillingly I fight time
keeping you near
until the coldness consumes me and I choke.

Words you longed to hear
and I thought so pointless
even as you cried with a last breath
hoping to be heard
the world was unconscious
looking only with ignorance
you felt worthless with the aid
of those you loved.


Comments about I Wait by hannah hatfield

  • (7/25/2010 1:10:00 PM)


    I liked this poem. The flow is nice. I felt myself wanting more as I finished. Its a good write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 9, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, August 16, 2013


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