Sunday, May 9, 2010

I Wait Comments

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I wait, the cold air being hit by smoke
you lie there effortlessly, you wait too
wait to be forgotten like the other ghosts I knew
unwillingly I fight time
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hannah hatfield
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Kevin Carney 25 July 2010

I liked this poem. The flow is nice. I felt myself wanting more as I finished. Its a good write.

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