Friday, January 22, 2010

I Was A Poet From The Start! Comments

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Rapping
Is not for me
I would rather slow
The verse down
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Jaycee Wilkerson
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Wild Flower 23 January 2010

My Favorite Part 'Rapping is not for me I would rather slow The verse down And enlighten you Without a beat My words have rhythm You can feel it In your feet My words vibe With your soul From my speech I can Warm whats cold My words are The Ice breaker No Im not a rapper Nor am i a actor But with a piece of paper My creativeness becomes A factor' Nice poem! Your word usage was very descriptive and created good imagery. Keep inkin!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 22 January 2010

my first comment here i think didn't register... anyway, nice poem!

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Jaycee Wilkerson

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