I Was Still Sad Comments

a very good poem sounding sad though...perfect lines...good language...surprised to see a comment down here...ignore such opinions, Negar...you have done well here...10

I have written hundreds of darkside contemporary prose & poems....as it has always been (i guess) , my strong suit, or forte.....and perhaps it is for you too? ! Keep That Pen Pumpi', young lady...and pay no mind to ignorant comments from they who know not a verse from a curse! F* j* R

Quite depressive for your age, but wonderful play of words in the biginning of the poem. 'Now i'm in........my eternal bed' having written such a beautiful line you should not be so sad, although sadness is the destiny of every human being.