Friday, May 8, 2009

I Was What I Am Not Today Comments

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I was what I am not today
The long day of my life stretches on:
Soon the dusk will fall and then
The night will also be gone;
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Rani Turton
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Ruth Walters 21 May 2009

haha, I loved the last little verse...... Ruthy.....very clever

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C. P. Sharma 20 May 2009

Wow! ! ! ! ! ! Life is in a melting pot Swings between the cold and hot CP

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Raj Nandy 19 May 2009

Dear Rani, I loved your poem. The impact of the first line was truly great! Change comes over us gradually in so many ways! I for one never thought, that after a busy life in the Air Force, I will sit down to write poems one day! For your poem 10! -Raj Nandy

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Kevin Wells 11 May 2009

Our mortality haunts us all and becomes ever more piquant as the sands of time run through our fingers. A lovely poem for everyman...and woman.

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Tom Balch 08 May 2009

We all wonder Rani, when our autumn is calling, great words, regards Tom

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