I wished I had a man
An understanding man
One that can even swim
one that might understand.
I wished I could win first prize and even fly,
But none of this imply's
Even if I eat fries.
Someone wishes he was here,
Even when he's very near,
Even can speak loud and clear.
I wished the sky was gray,
Just so I know he will stay,
I just wished he could say,
That he never play's games.
Someone who knows everything bout me, even my name.
Even someone who loves tha Blue Jays,
I wished he even cared,
someone who's there when I am even scared.
I wished I passed highschoool
Even think I am cool
I even wished I had a pool
I wished my uncle was here on earth,
Even was here at my birth,
And to just say he even cared,
But most of the time he stopped to stare.
I wished he was here when I need him the most,
At that I just wished he was here whether he was a ghost.
I just wished!
Written on: 5-3-08
By: Tissa Calvert
Age: 18 years old
Great piece, very interesting style... I've noticed that you repeat the word 'even' so many times... Is it accidential or have you planned it? What does it mean?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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