Identity - The Bully Poem by Jon Evans

Identity - The Bully

Rating: 2.3


They all try to look the same
all try to give themselves a name
pick on the boy who is all alone
just because his identity is his own
what has this world come to?
all this wrong that people do
just for the image they want to show
down the evil path they seem to go

The next person you go to hurt
or try to make feel like dirt
instead of trying to look cool
feel for the guy you make look a fool

A cool identity isn't a need
let those you bully be freed
Your identity should be your own
A better person you will be known.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 07 May 2008

Great poem, you should be in front of thousands of teens reading this amazing write...this is truly remarkable in every sense...10/10 from me. best wishes Jon

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Iveta Petrova 23 December 2008

i love the way this poem is written it really got me thinking i really like the way the words flow well done

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Sandra Gonzalez 06 May 2008

wow this is so true more teenagers should read this and realize how true it is.

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milly s 22 June 2019

this poem gives the people being bullied to step up and give the bully a piece of there mind.it gives them courage and power to stop the nonsense there going through

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jhiuh 25 April 2019

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Anon Girl 23 June 2011

This poem is amazing. I was a victim of bullying but I survived. I now go to a different school and have a happy life. But the bullies still haunt me, especially in my sleep. I wish the bullies could see this wonderful poem; It would teach them a valuble lesson. Thank you for sharing this poem :)

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Rachel Blank 09 March 2009

This poem is a great life lesson for all....do not let others control you into becoming 'one of them.' Be an individual, be yourself! And live for Your beliefs, not what everyone else wants you to be.

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Rashidah Rahman 21 January 2009

wow.this is an amazing poetry.really reflects on real life.its great.keep on writing! ! this is a masterpiece

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