If Poem by mark bowdidge

If



If i gave you the truth
-that's been eating me up inside
would you run scared?
like the one's before you
If i gave you the truth
-would it stop the bleeding?
im sorry if the poem is missleading
but my heart is barley beating
and i wounder if im dying
from lieing

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Connie Chambers 28 May 2008

no i will and never have ran just tell me what is this big lie u had told so many

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Barbara Terry 28 May 2008

Very emotional and with heartfelt feeling. I can sense the brooding here as you ask your questions. These are questions we ask ourselves everyday. You wrote this from inside of your soul. Keep writing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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