If I'm Still Alive Poem by Tor Magnor Solvang

If I'm Still Alive

Rating: 5.0

Sunlight paints my wrinkled hands,
A gentle warmth, a life's demands
Now softly settled, like the dust.
My eyes, they hold a quiet trust.

Five years have flown, a fleeting sigh.
Eighty years have drifted by.
My steps are slow, my breath is deep,
Secrets that the seasons keep.

My hair, a crown of silver spun,
Reflects the battles I have won.
My laughter, a sweet, creaky sound,
On memory's familiar ground.

I sit and watch the children play,
And dream sweet dreams
of yesterday.
A gentle smile, a knowing gaze,
Lost in time's sweet, hazy maze.

If I'm  Still Alive
Monday, July 13, 2026
Topic(s) of this poem: battles,seasons
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tamara Beryl Latham 14 July 2026

Loved it! Your reflection of yesteryear in a rhyming pattern encourages your readers to visualize the comforts that define the past. Thanks for posting and keep writing. : -)

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