***if Life Means.. Poem by TARA.. Star

***if Life Means..

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If life means path of obstecles,
I'll conquer them all
If life means seasons of challenge
I'll accept them all
If life means road of ups & down
I'll enjoy them all
If life means smiling when get hurt
I wont let my tears to fall
If life means giving and forgivng
I'll remit the mistakes of all
If life means realizing ones dreams
I wont compromise at all
If life means to live lively
I'll live it with you all
If life means being kind and good
I'll be generous to all
If life means your dreams, your life and you
I'll shine them all………….

TARA
Will shine always…..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khilil Perry 27 May 2009

Very good poem magnificient

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Afzal Shauq 03 June 2009

yeah agreed with your idea if life.... sure its what you mean.. its really a good pom with rich idea and the flow is very much poetic... you got 10+++ points and hope you will continue looking at my poems too

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this poem is very touch-full i really like it woonderful A+ keep it up. Heh heh heh

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Sneha 'The Poetess' 30 May 2009

thats a tough poem...and u seem to be a tough person.....more people shud have the same outlook as you do.....gr8 job! ! ! .... loved it..... :)

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Akram Saqib 29 May 2009

BRAVO! GREAT COURAGEOUS WORDS

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 May 2009

A marvelous poem, lovely 10+++

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