Ivan Ramirez N

Rookie (3/18/1999 / Illinois)

If There Was A Place - Poem by Ivan Ramirez N

If there was a place,
were you could let your-self astray,
with no delay's.
No one telling you what to do,
No more living in other people's shoe's.
Live your life,
even if it isn't perfect,
just be happy,
for what you have,
And always remember that special place,
where life is not complicated,

like a shoelace,
That little Perfect Place in your mind.


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  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (8/19/2010 3:49:00 AM)


    A child-like longing for freedom is nicely presented.Congras. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 19, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 12, 2011


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