If Walls Could Speak Poem by Jade Hasbro

If Walls Could Speak



If walls could speak
they'd say hello
they saw me not breathing
and my life begin to close.

If walls could speak
they'd say i wasnt alone
that there are others out there
who will actually care

If i could speak
I'd tell them to shut up
i have cried so many tears
i don't wanna be here

The big problem
is that people don't care
they walk on by
as if I'm not there.

So I might as well
not be so in need
because people will just look at me
and watch me bleed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Oldham 13 September 2008

Walls often listen to whispered coversations... if only they could talk as well! But in this poem they do, they're more than just a pile of bricks. Love it! Thanks. :) Please write some more, I love your poems! Athena xx

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Aisha Love 13 April 2008

this poem is great it seems as if the walls were people

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Will P. Litter 11 April 2008

Your poem felt like there were more than walls. Thanks for sharing

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