Friday, July 11, 2008
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Do not grieve if i am dead,
do not repeat a word i said,
if i cry,
do not feel the want to die.
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Celise Mclean
11 July 2008
um very instresting Lauren, your poem is about death right? and your feelings towards it, you seem to sum up your emotions almost in a commedic way, good try would have been good if it was more in depth though.
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3/13/2026 12:56:34 AM # 1.0.0
Interesting...