'If You Meant' Comments
If you meant to add to this pain I'm feeling,
Then your arrows hit their mark!
If you were aiming not to hit me,
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Linda, you started this nicely with couplets. I would suggest that you continue the couplets. Your first four-line stanza needs reworking...one line makes no sense at all. Otherwise, I think your poem does what you want it to do. We've all been there at one time or another. Raynette
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1/15/2026 7:50:23 PM # 1.0.0
you speak straight and true! rare & good rgds