If You Try To Philosophise! Comments

I agree with hans! lol This is a brilliant maiden poem Sue. Your neice Tai Chi Italy Simply Loves it and you x

like it, it's a piece about human negativity esp. in relation to another being, isn't it?

Congrats, Susan, You have put your first poem on the net. The poem is a good one. You address the very nature of crime and managed to express your opinion in a poetic way. Well done. Keep on posting poems.