Sunday, December 10, 2006

If You Were To Love Me Comments

Rating: ★3.7

If you were to love me.
I would be strong I'd be weak
I'm sure we would lose sleep
I'd be yours for you to keep
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Mark Stone
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Daniel Tyler 16 December 2006

I disliked your tone on the forum and I've made that very clear, however, I'm judging the poem here and it is really pleasant. This shows good use of internal rhyme and lovely turns of phrase. Well done

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