Praneet Bhavan


If You Weren'T With Me - Poem by Praneet Bhavan

I'm sure this would've been aboring trip
if you weren't with me

No matter what goes on before my eyes
you are all i see

I hear shouts from the crowd around us
but all i care about is you being happy

The time passes ever so quick
as long as i am with thee!


Comments about If You Weren'T With Me by Praneet Bhavan

  • (5/2/2008 11:12:00 AM)


    Good piece indeed... you could have added a few more lines as 'SHE' is deemed to be so special.It is nice that Praneet you are very caring... (Report) Reply

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  • (4/27/2008 12:00:00 PM)


    from different people, I LOVE this poems, this poems like to different people amazing and wonderful (Report) Reply

  • (4/27/2008 12:00:00 PM)


    from different people, I LOVE this poems, this poems like to different people amazing and wonderful (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 3, 2008



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