Unable To Control Poem by Praneet Bhavan

Unable To Control



As i lie here in exasperation
unable to control any one of my actions

you just ignore me as if everthing is normal
when all this is because you, when you turned into my rival

you really hurt me this time
though i hate to admit-the fault is really mine

i really hate myself at this moment
though i really wish i could change the incident!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

This one was very interresting cuz of a inc.in my life

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Danny Fairfield 06 May 2008

I really enjoyed this one

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Greenwolfe 1962 26 April 2008

I really felt this one because of an incident in my own life. GW62

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