Saturday, November 19, 2016

Igloo And Tipi Comments

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Igloo and tipi

Want to be Indian
(As you, called! ! !
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Birgitta Abimbola Heikka 19 November 2016

Very enjoyable poem. Could add “Want to live in a hut or not? ” Love the comparison of chemicals and metals to pains on Mother Earth (more like poisoning Mother Earth) . My favorite verse is the one before the last and I especially love the last 2 lines: “Will end and will die there No matter how and when.”

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Nassy Fesharaki 19 November 2016

Thank you very much and kind of you...all the best.

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