Friday, May 11, 2012

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May be I was just eight or nine
Since that time I never felt fine.
Busy with their work my mum and dad.
Grandma, and grandpa they were bad
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sushanta rokka
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Dave Walker 11 May 2012

A great poem like it, a great write. May I invite you to read my poem called, Oxygen Low.

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