The wind told me you’re leaving today
With voice so harsh it laid trees bare
Again he said you’re leaving today
Hissed through the vines his ill tidings
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poetry was and is and will always be a tool to convey a message. however, not all has the ability to see the 'real meaning of every words/line' that poet has painted his/her message. never the less poetry has been the voice of emossion since then.
'ill wind' expresses to me the pain and the courage behind good byes. actually am not comfortable with this words- the painful exprience that hunted me till now is because of this 'good bye'. ironic as it is: good (what is really good after all): bye (gesture of what-) .
the poem reminded me of those people saying good bye to me not because they are moving somewhere or called to do aother things in other places, but they made it as an excuse to journey with me as a son, a brothe, even a friend.
annyhow nice work...i like it. all the best
note: if you could find sometime please read some of my works. thanks
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poetry was and is and will always be a tool to convey a message. however, not all has the ability to see the 'real meaning of every words/line' that poet has painted his/her message. never the less poetry has been the voice of emossion since then. 'ill wind' expresses to me the pain and the courage behind good byes. actually am not comfortable with this words- the painful exprience that hunted me till now is because of this 'good bye'. ironic as it is: good (what is really good after all): bye (gesture of what-) . the poem reminded me of those people saying good bye to me not because they are moving somewhere or called to do aother things in other places, but they made it as an excuse to journey with me as a son, a brothe, even a friend. annyhow nice work...i like it. all the best note: if you could find sometime please read some of my works. thanks