Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, May 13, 2013

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World is full illusions
There is no room for any confusion
We live with in situation that we do not want
And part with what really is not our part
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Mollie Smith52 minutes ago sounds like a experience

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Coy M54 minutes ago Overall it is pretty enjoyable Comment +1 LIFE Jacob Filippus53 minutes ago Good Comment +1 Good Great Boonah SCat54 minutes ago Hasmukh you are such a great poet, you have an innate understanding of the human condition and an ability to put it

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Chantelle Cox54 minutes ago unique Comment +1 im guessing Great Boonah SCat54 minutes ago Hasmukh you are such a great poet, you have an innate understanding of the human condition and an ability to put it so beautifully into poetry. Comment +1 love it good poem Alexandar Petkov50 minutes ago Nice piece... relatively smooth flow. Rhyme is lost at some points but it's still good.

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Gajanan Mishra 13 May 2013

world is full illusions - o poet, this is also my conviction, I beg pardon, give some poetic solution.

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It is inherent weakness with strong inhibition

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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