Illusions Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Illusions

Rating: 5.0


World is full illusions
There is no room for any confusion
We live with in situation that we do not want
And part with what really is not our part

The nature is very much there
We have to search and go nowhere
You have everything within sight
Make choice that has to be very right

We believe in deception
We claim innocence but want no mention
The identity crisis is big question
Rest everything is built on wrong relation

You pray almighty for happiness
Do nothing good to leave behind any trace
Who can remember when you are no more?
There are no words that may be worth to adore

We have penetrated in ever field
The interest and attachment is largely varied
There is undue haste and eagerness
even if there is no chance on surface

It may be sheer madness and stupidity
But in today’s date it has its validity
Everybody wants to be rich over night and be called millionaire
No place is left vacant to be probed anywhere

It is said “person is influenced by his own thinking”
He may flow with the air and at the same time sink too
There is no limit to his fancy and ambition
It is inherent weakness with strong inhibition

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Mollie Smith52 minutes ago sounds like a experience

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Coy M54 minutes ago Overall it is pretty enjoyable Comment +1 LIFE Jacob Filippus53 minutes ago Good Comment +1 Good Great Boonah SCat54 minutes ago Hasmukh you are such a great poet, you have an innate understanding of the human condition and an ability to put it

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Chantelle Cox54 minutes ago unique Comment +1 im guessing Great Boonah SCat54 minutes ago Hasmukh you are such a great poet, you have an innate understanding of the human condition and an ability to put it so beautifully into poetry. Comment +1 love it good poem Alexandar Petkov50 minutes ago Nice piece... relatively smooth flow. Rhyme is lost at some points but it's still good.

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Gajanan Mishra 13 May 2013

world is full illusions - o poet, this is also my conviction, I beg pardon, give some poetic solution.

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It is inherent weakness with strong inhibition

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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