Im Not Changing Poem by Rose heathway

Im Not Changing

Rating: 3.5


the summer
still hangs
heavy and sweet
with sunlight
as it did last year

the autumn
still comes
showering gold and crimson
as it did last year

the winter
still stings
clean and cold and white
as it did last year

the spring
still comes
like a whisper in the dark night

they didn't change and neither
will I.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francis Tikava 24 February 2012

Nice, strong poem. It has some endearing prose and then a steadfast end. I like it. Could you please read a couple of my poems and tell me what you think?

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