Sheel Patel

Rookie (1st March,1988 / Ahmedabad)

Immature Love.. - Poem by Sheel Patel

Mad in love with, I felt a sweet swift in my heart.
Pinched everyday in my mind though the heart was completely devoted.
Provided console with lots of self contend and dabbled with the emotions.
Unable to resist the deluge of blood through my veins.
Unable to understand decoy of foolish affection with long hair.
Misguided by inflation of artificial smile and behavior fooled my innocent…
Tried hard to hold self back and erase those days of animation.
Cried soft to let the air of convivial spread around…
Seeking for a new beginning sweeping away those unstopping tears,
Neglecting the emptiness during the time of loneliness.
Having rest of the time of my life Lonesome-blue.
Hopping to cure the deep bruise before demise…
Which never happened and took a really long to disgorge from my life.
In the end, it led the divine soul away in the desolation.
Left the body for a peaceful sleep, Stupid immature love!


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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 23, 2010



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