Immaturity Poem by bHabiE sHarK

Immaturity



succumb me be w/ innocence and sin,
grief and sadness, mis guided gladness....
could never have thought to be so immature
to trample you in days then ignore you away....

so foolish of me to never have said,
apologies of mine, that hurt you in time...
why am I like this, like I'm frozen shut,
never to relinguish what i felt inside...

this problemed me for hundreds of days,
had put me in pain, like I'm shackled in chains...
cursed me w/ sorrows, burdened me w/ terror...
thanks of all the sins that i'll yet to bring tomorrow...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 17 September 2008

wow... very dramatic. Definately had an impact on my soul. Well done. Enjoyed it.

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