My Biggest Mistake Poem by bHabiE sHarK

My Biggest Mistake

Rating: 5.0


Stop carrying other's life,
it's their misery, not yours...

don't think that you can make a difference,
cause you can't...

you were supposed to but you failed...
and now that you'r trying again,

you can't cause you've already faltered...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 15 April 2009

a thoughtful and amazing write here.. enjoyed reading it 10+++

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 April 2009

Stop carrying other's life, it's their misery, not yours... don't think that you can make a difference, cause you can't...................you should forward this lines to all the poets of ph.........great write...................amazing understanding that is not seen in grown up..............10+++..............

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