Immortality Poem by Susan LeGree
Immortality
What happens
when it all is written
and there's nothing
left to say.
Will it then be the time
to leave this place
and go upon my way.
I've left a trail of written
words that bare my soul
and speak of what
I had to give.
If someone, anyone
now absorbs my thoughts;
smiles and cries with me -
do I not still live?
This is a classic example of what a poem should be. It's gentle flow leads the reader towards a question to ponder, leaving it's meaning stuck in the mind long after the page is turned.
This reminds me of old classic poets; especially those who were translated so that we could enjoy their words. I am hardwired to adore this style and this poem. It is perfection really, to me.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 1:27:24 AM # 1.0.0.1119
great write, great flow. i dont know about forever but you are being noticed now.