in a sudden everything disappears
and everythung in its real way appears
the life pressure starts to increase
and you can hear your heart beats
and your balance starts to decrease
and you cant even breath
when all your dreams are turned down
and in the sea of lost you are drown
and sadness became your crown
your heart feel hurt
and you realize that people were made of dirt
all of that happens in a sudden
the sudden when you know that he didnt really love you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well, sometimes one discovers unpleasant things so suddenly and it feels exactly the way you've described it - excellent metaphor! Beautiful write... you hold a pen made of real emotions - that's the best poetic tool you could ever ask for :)