Thursday, May 1, 2014

In America's Finest City Comments

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This Quiet Pool in “America’s Finest City”
Just opened its belly to welcome strangers:
Independent travelers who rented one another
Baptized in chlorine swimming in street lights.
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jason wymore
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Colleen Courtney 02 May 2014

Hmm...if pools could talk. Nicely written poem but am confused by the line, playing her fingers with his spine. Would this not make better sense as playing her spine with his fingers?

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Colleen Courtney 02 May 2014

If pools could talk! Nicely done!

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