In Life Poem by Josehf Murchison
In Life
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In Life
In childhood you're playful.
In youth you are lustful.
In old age you're feeble.
By
Josehf Lloyd Murchison
Tuesday, January 9, 2024
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Honest Critiques Wanted An anaphora, gnome or gnomic tercet, in hexasyllabic meter and mono near rhyme. Image by Josehf Lloyd Murchison.
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5/1/2024 8:50:34 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Hexasyllabic is six syllables per line. Well done. If I were to add a fourth line, I would change the period at the end of line three to a comma, and my fourth line would be 'and also forgetful.'
I do have a fourth line, 'In death you are peaceful.' To me it didn't fit with in life.